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JoneStranger
GRAPHIC NOVEL
JARRETTE FELLOWS, JR.
JoneStranger is a self-styled vigilante, ex-US Army intelligence officer (full bird colonel) fed-up with runaway crime, failure of law enforcement to curtail crime in fictional city of Metrobia, like gang turf wars over illicit drug trade, police, political corruption.
JS’ alter ego Rushia (RUS-sha) Gerard makes himself a committee-of-one to make an impact on the madness, initially to bring to justice the young urban thugs (JS calls Yutties) to justice, whom law enforcement has had little success (purposely) in interdicting.
What drives Rushia Gerard into action is a rumor on social media of a declaration by Crips and Blood gang factions a 100-day gangland murder spree to kill 100 innocent people adorned in a red or blue clothing item. Several random shootings marked by one physically-challenged teenager who wore green laces in his sneakers sends JS into the night to find and apprehend the shooter and deliver him (with evidence) to the Metrobia County Sheriff Department or the Metrobia Police Department (MPD) 77th Street station.
JoneStranger is adorned in carefully designed attire that blends with his environment (black trousers, shirt, gloves, loose-fitting trench coat, black Stetson brim hat). Attire blends with ordinary to onlookers. Items are in actuality high-tech garments digitally wired, bullet-proof, stab proof; Wears a high-tech waist-belt device that obscures his physical appearance rendering him nearly invisible at night.
JoneStranger zips about in the darkness in a modified Swedish-made hyper sports car—the Koenigsegg Jesko Absolut, with a top speed of 330 miles per hour, the fastest car in the world.
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WEAPONS
JoneStranger’s modus operandi is to refrain from killing, but when unavoidable can and/will use deadly force in drastic situations. As story evolves, he will kill one individual who left him no choice. This is when law enforcement interest in him will go from casual annoyance to “Top-10 Fugitive" when charges against him escalate to homicide.
JS has a number of miniature immobilizing crime-fighting devices at his disposal attached in his light-weight trench-like coat. Here is his total weapons cache (doesn’t carry all of these weapons at once):
• Light weight flex steel toe/rubber sole boots
• Black attire is light weight made of special super tough fabric
• 60,000 watt miniature rechargeable (cell phone-size) taser
• Tranquilizing darts tipped with concentrated ketamine tranquilizer
• Red powder mist immobilizer (small cubes that explode into red mist on impact)
• Special light-weight alloy .357 magnum with 20-clips and silencer
• Miniature lithium battery-operated police scanner
• Portable lithium battery operated night vision (infra-red wrap-around eyewear); cell phone and camera
• Specially-designed unbreakable, cut-proof, fire proof plastic hand ties
• Street fighter. Japanese combat judoka/jui jitsu expert; Zendoryu karate, Hapkido expert. JS’ repertoire of offensive/defensive skills include pin-point kicks, punches, knee strikes, back fists, 180- and 360-degree spinning kicks, elbow strikes, knife hands, ridge hands, back fist/bottom fists, spear hands, joint manipulation, arm/wrist locks, arm/knee bars, and a multitude of chokes.
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JoneStranger also employs tiny robotic creepy-crawlies—Micro Drone Insect Operatives or MDIOs that ingenuously mimic bugs, insects and arachnids, engineered with cameras and recording devices for intelligence gathering. The design of US biomechanics, the MDIOs operate as flying drones—bees, flies, butterflies and dragonflies—and common crawling insects like water bugs, beetles, grasshoppers, locusts and crickets.
JoneStranger targets murderers, thieves, rapists, drug dealers, gang bangers, abusive cops, and illicit drug lab operatives—message to them, “I will be watching!”
Will be spun around real crimes in the fictional city of Metrobia with interplay from mayor, council, police chief, activists, community leaders with fictitious names to provide a sense of reality, although the storyline will be enhanced with false, but imaginative angles and sub-plots.
JoneStranger is not a full-time crime fighter, but hits the streets periodically to throw off law enforcement about his movements, and to keep the Yuts (Young Urban Thugs) and other criminal elements skittish, unable to get too relaxed for fear of “The Spook With the Brim” as they call him, lurking nearby at the edge of darkness.
EPISODE 1
The 'Green Shoelaces' murder
AWAKE IN THE A.M. AFTER A RESTLESS NIGHT...
Rushia Gerard springs awake, abruptly throws the covers from his body,
knowing he has much to do. A glance at his bedside clock reveals a false
alarm—it is only a quarter past five. He’d been restless all night and
didn’t sleep well. The green shoelace killer weighed heavily on his mind.
Hopping out of bed, Rush grabbed his bathrobe and flopped into the
big black leather chair before his computer, fired it up and waited
for the Google 10 logo to appear.
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Before the screen in thought the lit screen casts him in silhouette:
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“Crimes have gone down since I slept…. I know County Sheriff
Rob Muna's cowboys failed to corral the killer of that young boy!
Perhaps the press should pay more attention to escalating
crime in Metrobia, and less to side-shows like
Ronald Rump's media theatrics!”
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"The strategy meetings between the political heirarchy
gettin' stale. Mayor Katie Fisch, Congresswoman Roxanne
Rivers, Sup. Janna Hall and Muna may mean well, but I
THINK IT'S TIME FOR THE STRANGER TO HIT THE SCENE!
IN THOUGHT FACING COMPUTER…
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“Time to make another round—pay those Yuts, the
Lime Street gang a night call. They killed that kid
‘cause he wore greenlaces! And they're still
walkin' around free and braggin'!
“I’ll round ‘em up! Congresswoman Rivers is
right—‘someone’s gotta pay for the damage they
did to Metrobia, flooding it with drugs and guns!'”
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FRONT VIEW OF RUSHIA FACING COMPUTER
Consternation in his expression.
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“… and gotta plug the cartels too or they’re
gonna reduce America to a stupor ...
if she's not already there!
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"But, first need to gather some intel on the
Lime Street gang responsible for the kid's
murder. They hang out daily at The Bistro ... .
I'll pay the joint a visit and deploy MDIO-1 to
gather some irrefutable intel for indictment
and conviction... ."
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LATER THAT AFTERNOON...
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Rushia Gerard sits at a patio table outside The
Bistro inconspicuously munching on a double
cheeseburger and fries, having already released
MDIO-1 water bug, which scurried to a hidden locale
out of sight inside the guest dining area ahead of any
of the arriving Lime Street gangsters.
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"Now, I'll await for the transferral of the intel..."
Rushia thought to himself, slurping a Pepsi.
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MEANWHILE...
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Several hours elapsed since Rushia Gerard planted
the robotic spy at The Bistro, now enveloped in the
darkness of nightfall. The Lime Street gang numbered
20 strong on this night—several engaged in a game
of bid whist, four more slamming dominoes, and the
rest munching edibles, fixated on the Lakers and
Nuggets game on a mounted 60-inch big screen.
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Unbeknownst to them, the robotic spy had been
gathering intel and transmitting undetected to
Rushia Gerard for hours now in a chandelier
hanging from the ceiling.
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The bid whist action dominated the scene,
with the gang set's 30-year-old leader Rayvon
"Gallows" Charles commanding attention with
his raucous outbursts.
Slapping a winning card hand on the table...
"That's a plus-seven," he bellowed. "Me and my
pot-ner triumph! Hell, that was easier than
smokin' that lil chump wearin' green shoe
strings in my 'hood! He had to go, and ya'll
gotta pay! That's "Gallows" truth!"
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ELSEWHERE...
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"MDIO-1 aced it!" Rushia Gerard shouted.
"Got a confession and photo ID. I will make
a house call tomorrow at The Bistro to gather
the package for the Metrobia County Sheriff,
along with digital evidence—and a scoop for
Metrobia Herald Editor Jerrold Goodfellows...
"I will sleep soundly tonight."
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THE NEXT DAY, MONDAY, RUSHIA GERARD
initiated his action plan before sunrise,
messaging the same intel directly to both
the rookie Sheriff Muna and the Metrobia
Herald's veteran publisher Goodfellows.
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Glancing at his watch, several hours expired
since he pushed the "send button" on his PC.
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"Both men should have the message by now,
aware that an extraordinary event will befall
them soon—that a new breed of crime snuffer
will emerge in Metrobia to make the city a
safer more lawful place.
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MEANWHILE ... at both Sheriff Muna's office and
the Metrobia Herald, similar energy was churning.
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Muna read the note with interest, aware from
36 years in law enforcement that vigilantes would
from time-to-time rise with grandiose notions of
single-handedly circumventing crime. Muna was
very careful not to overreach as former Metrobia
Police Chief Renard C.P. Larks had done in the
1990s to Kurt Sliwall and his Guardian Angels,
when they voluntarily instituted patrols of
Metrobia's worst neighborhoods.
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Instead, he assigned Undersheriff May Tardee
to follow-up and keep him posted.
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At the Herald, Jarrold Goodfellows wasn't
about to pass on a potential scoop, unaware
if any other media had been apprised. He
assigned coverage of the story to long-time
reporter Doug Lincoln and the Herald's
star photojournalist Roddie Rashly. Their
task was to quickly get the story posted
online ahead of the competition.
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LATER AT 7 P.M. MONDAY EVENING ...
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The Bistro was teeming with activity, with the
entire Lime Street Gang present—as was the case
most nights during the week—engaged in table-top
gambling, billiards, attuned to sports on the big
screen or chowing down.
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They hadn't noticed the sudden appearance of the
guest adorned in all black at the entrance to the
cafe—until he caught Gallows' eye.
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"This ain't open to the public from 7 to 10 p.m.
—it's a private party," Gallows lied, something
he and his cohorts had been doing for a year to
maintain their exclusivity. The owner dare not
object and the gang kindly obliged him with $10k
per month to serve them food, and to use the
cafe as their private gang set for three hours on
weekdays and two additional hours to midnight
on the weekends and holidays.
The stranger held a red cube in his right clench,
trench coat collar turned up, and brim hat tilted
low over his brow so that his face was hardly
discernable. He also wore a black mask over his
mouth and nose, and didn't flinch.
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"I said this is a private set, maan—why you still
standing there?" Gallows barked. That's when all
eyes turned on the stranger, who subsequently
tossed the red cube several feet above the gang,
hitting the ceiling and bursting profusely into a
red mist, quickly enveloping the entire cafe in
a rouge mist, rendering everyone instantly
unconscious, collapsing to the floor and
slumping where they sat.
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Unfortunately, the cafe owner suffered the same
fate. But the stranger took special precaution to
turn off stove-top burners and ovens to prevent
a fire in the cafe.
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"Never planned to remain here, Gallows," the stranger
said, after which he shackled the gang leader's hands
together with two indestructible plastic ties around a
circular steel pole in the center of The Bistro dining
area extending from the floor to the ceiling.
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The stranger emerged from the cafe activating a device
within his trench coat that renders him hard to detect
during nightfall. He blended into the darkness not a
moment too soon.
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Just then, four Metrobia Sheriff units pull up and one other
vehicle bearing a reporter and photographer from the Herald.
The time was 8 o'clock p.m.
EPISODE 2
By the Light of the Moon:
Justice in the 'Green Shoelaces' murder
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WHAT KIND OF MUCK? ...
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Sheriff Rob Muna didn't take part in interrogating
suspects or attending interrogations. But this one was
special involving the slaughter of a kid scarcely
past the growth spurts of puberty.
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The indicted but yet unconvicted Rayvon Charles, aka "Gallows,"
was seated on a stool with hands bound behind his back.
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"I just had to see for myself what kind of muck puts a .38
caliber slug into an unarmed kid over some damn green
shoestrings?" Muna said.
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"I'm innocent. I AIN'T DONE WHAT I'M ACCUSED OF ...
THIS IS A RACIST SET-UP!" Charles snapped.
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"Oh, we got our man! We have your confession on tape,
and a video of you mouthing the confession bragging
about your deed, Rayvon Charles, alias GALLOWS!"
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Charles turned to Sheriff Muna in the low-light room.
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"The Sheriff Department ain't piss—ya'll deputies ain't dog
piss! Some spook in all black crashed our party and somehow
drugged us," Charles complained. "Next thing I know, um in
the back of a police car! My homies laid it out for me!
That's got to be illegal!
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"The evidence will stand up in court this week, where I'm
confident you will be found guilty and hopefully put away
for life in a Federal or State penitentiary!" Muna scowled.
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"You won't be a guest here at Metrobia Central, long.
We're shipping you out, Charles!"
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"W-h-a-t-e-v-e-r ... just another Black political
prisoner," Charles bemoaned.
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MUNA GLARED AT CHARLES FOR AN EXTENDED MOMENT.
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"Send this misfit back to his cell!"
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LATER THAT WEEK AT A THURSDAY NEWS CONFERENCE
IN FRONT OF THE METROBIA COUNTY JAIL ...
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Sheriff Muna stood at a podium joined by Undersheriff
May Tardee and other members of his brass. He revealed
a disconcerting expression to a bevy of reporters and
photojournalists assembled before him.
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"I don't know how a newspaper managed to upstage me,"
Muna said, "but they did. Anyway ...
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"I'M HERE TO ANNOUNCE THE SUSPECT THE SHERIFF
DEPARTMENT APPREHENDED AND BROUGHT TO JUSTICE,
WAS SENT TO STATE PRISON WEDNESDAY, CONVICTED
BY A JURY OF HIS PEERS ON 4 CRIMINAL COUNTS,
INCLUDING FIRST DEGREE MURDER IN THE
KILLING OF 12 YEAR-OLD ANDRAE TAY!"
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A local activist interrupted the sheriff, holding a
newspaper above his head bearing the a banner—
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"JONES STRANGER NABS 'GREEN SHOESTRINGS KILLER!'"
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"Looks like there's a new sheriff in town," joked Ali Najae,
prompting members of the press to turn to him.
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"Where did you get that?" a young White female journalist
from the mainstream Metrobia Examiner asked.
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"I don't know—you'll have to ask them ... the story reads the
Stranger said his name was 'Jones'. I don't know. Interview
the editor—Jarrold Goodfellows," Najae chuckled.
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EPISODE 3
MDIO-1 Keeps on Transmitting:
Slippin' Into Darkness
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Early Friday morning, Rushia was on the computer checking
with MDIO-1 to listen in on the chatter at The Bistro. Gallows,
their leader was tucked away in the California Correctional
Institute at Carlsbad, but it was business as usual with the
gang set busy as normal in the proliferation, movement
and sale of illicit drugs in Southern California with the
Colombia-based Zorra Colombiano Cartel .
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A red light flashed intermittently on the computer
screen. Rushia was eager to learn what intel the
robotic operative had gathered for him this time.
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"MDIO-1 has attained the following intel for
Agent Rushia Gerard by text messaging and audio:
First, the test message: 'Representatives of the
Lime Street Gang will meet with representatives
of Zorra Colombiano Cartel @ 1 a.m. Sunday next,
at the remote rear of the South Bay Airport for
the transfer of 1000 multi-colored plastic
vials, each containing 1,000 tablets of the
opioid fentanyl for a combined total
of 1 million tablets.'"
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"Now the audio intel."
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Rushia zeroed in on one of the Lime Street gang—
Caspar Robinson, aka "Boo," who assumed "No. 1 G"
in place of the deposed Gallows who was sentenced
to 90 years+ 10 years for each of the Andrae Tay's
12 years of life, without the possibility of parole.
Rushia Gerard turned up the volume on the PC.
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"The meet and exchange of the package is set for
Sunday at 1 a.m.," Caspar confirmed aloud
to no one in particular.
"This one is extra SWEEET! Gonna make
bank on this one. Gotta do our due diligence.
Who said the American Dream ain't for us?
Believe that if you want sucka. Not me!
Turn up the jams—let's party!"
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The Lime Street gangsters were completely
oblivious to MDIO-1 and its meticulous spy work.
It hadn't occurred to them the place might be
bugged. Rudy Smith, The Bistro's owner, had
his suspicions that the gang was being watched.
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Rushia Gerard pushed back from the computer
screen, rubbed his eyes and sighed.
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"There's a helleva haul coming in," he mused. "This may
be one of the biggest illicit movements of fentanyl in the
drug's history. Well, I'm gonna upset the apple cart.
"Uncle Sam is a chronic addict, and his lust for
mind-altering drugs is being fed at every turn. He's
desperate to escape the realities of life."
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SUNDAY AT 9 P.M., SOUTH BAY AIRPORT
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"All quiet at ground zero—a mite too quiet," the
stranger thought, sitting in his Black Cloud Koenigsegg
Jesko Absolut cloaked in near invisibility at the end of
the back street bordering the airport. "I'm indebted to
Army engineering for creating this cloaking mechanism
that enables me and the car to blend in the darkness ...
"Engenders the 70's soul classic, 'Slippin' Into Darkness,'"
by War," the stranger chuckles. "I inherited my dad's gold
LP collection. That jam soothed me a many days. But,
here I am now, slippin' in the darkness..."
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Movement at the other end of the block snapped the
stranger out of his trance. He'd done his part. In position
and ready to close in once the cartel contacts appeared
with members of the Lime Street gang, were the sheriff
department, Drug Enforcement Agency, ATF, agents of
the FBI, and South Bay Police. They had positioned
themselves out of sight since the afternoon.
The stranger was only there to observe and mop up
any stray bad guys attempting to slip the trap. The
coalition had no inkling of his presence.
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THE RENDEZVOUS
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At 10 p.m. four vehicles—all dark-colored SUV's
turned onto the street and parked spaced apart
at the other end of the block. The stranger spied
them through night-vision goggles. Several men
occupied each vehicle. They did not exit the
vehicles immediately.
The stranger knew they were scanning the area
for anything appearing conspicuously out of place.
Unbeknownst to them, they had already given the
coalition justifiable cause to search them.
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Four SUVs appearing roughly at the same time late
at night on a sparsely driven street was suspicion. The
stranger wondered what was holding the coalition back.
"I gather the drug dealers are content to wait as close
to the switching hour or until 1 a.m. to execute the
transfer, making sure of no encroachment," the
stranger surmised.
TWO HOURS ELAPSE ...
The stranger flashed the time on the dashboard.
The time was 12:30 a.m. There had not been any
movement from the occupants in the SUVs for
more than two hours since their arrival.
Then the stranger discovered why. Abruptly
appearing in the sky was a single helicopter
that didn't betray it presence. The stranger
spliced it all together.
"Obviously the other half of the party—
most likely the Zorra Colombiano Cartel
arriving in a stealth chopper."
The stranger watched the helo through his
night vision goggles touch down minus any lights
or noise. He readily recognized the craft.
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"Hmmm ... heavily modified Sikorsky UH-60
Black Hawk helo, specifically to achieve several
goals: invisibility to radar, reduced infrared signature
minimizing the heat emitted by the engine exhaust,
and acoustic noise reduction," he thought. "The
cartel certainly has the money to buy such
crafts, no doubt through a third party."
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It all became clear to the stranger.
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"I understand now why the coalition didn't move in
when the SUVs first arrived. They had intel I didn't,
that the cartel would arrive separately by helo.
Kudos to them! he said.
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The stranger watched 16 occupants vacate the
SUVs and enter an unlocked gate to the tarmac.
He knew someone at the airport had abetted
the drug exchange—clearing the helicopter
landing, and leaving the gate unlocked.
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"I'm confident the coalition will tie-up all the
pieces in the caper," the stranger thought,
as he could see coalition members with guns
drawn, slowly moving in on and surrounding
the illicit drug merchants.
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Then, in a July Fourth-esque explosion of flash
bang grenades, flashing red lights, wailing sirens
and a bullhorn blasting commands, the quietly
serene wee morn was transformed.
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"STOP WHERE YOU ARE OR WE WILL SHOOT!"
LIE DOWN FACE TO THE GROUND—EXTEND
YOUR ARMS ON THE GROUND ABOVE YOUR HEADS!
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"EXTENDER TUS BRAZOS EN EL SUELO POR ENCIMA
DE TUS CABEZAS!" a second command blared in Spanish.
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Members of the coalition began handcuffing the drug
dealers, while others removed metallic cases containing
the contraband from the helo.
The operation was carried out without a hitch. Not
one shot was fired in the sting with a round-up
of 20 total suspects, and an estimated grab of
1 million fentanyl tablets.
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The stranger was gratified by the outcome of the
operation. It was just one more evil deception
crushed into defeat.
BACK AT THE PAD FEELING TRIUMPHANT
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Rushia Gerard knew that the South Bay Airport haul,
and the huge intercept augmented by The California National
Guard supported counter-drug operations of the seizure of more
than 1 million fentanyl pills at the California-Mexico border two
months ago—including more than 592,900 pills at the state's
ports of entry, didn't amount to a scratch in the big picture.
"I know we didn't rattle the bear all that much in the last
two interdictions of fentanyl, but we annoyed him; that
is a strategic victory in my opin," Rushia thought.
"Besides, Gov. Gabe Oldsom's deployment of the
California National Guard in the recent raid, and this
morning's combined efforts made some headway.
"We took 20 drug operatives out of the loop—
four were members of the Zorra Colombiano Cartel,
and 16 were Lime Street YUTS from Metrobia."
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